Here is a copy of the letter I'll be sending tomorrow (details removed). Any advice on improvements?
Thanks
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Dear Sir
• On ? we ordered a conservatory from ******, paying a deposit of £1400.
• We were informed by your sales person (Mr……) that if planning permission was required (as expected, due to an existing extension) that an addition charge of £300 would be required.
• It was stressed that (company) would handle the complete planning process.
• I also called your office in ****** to confirm that we would not incur any further charges until planning permission was obtained. Confirmation was given
• After some time, we were informed by your office that a tree report would be needed to support the planning application. Contrary to the assurances that were given at the time of ordering, we had to arrange, and pay for that ourselves, which took some time due to our unfamiliarity with the process.
• When the tree report was prepared I returned it to your office who forwarded it to the planning office.
• I was later contacted and informed that further information about other trees on the property was needed. I provided that myself, directly back to the planning office.
• Around 8 weeks later we were informed by the planning office that the application had been rejected, and that your office had been informed. We waited for confirmation from your office which did not arrive, so I called on ….. to ask for the return of the deposit. I was informed that the Managing Director needed to sign the cheque, but was on holiday – returning on ?. I was told I would be contaced when he returned.
• A week after the return data on 7.5.08 I had heard nothing, so called again. Eventually I was called back by your office who informed me that costs incurred by Wilmer Windows were “within £4 of the value of the deposit” They gave me the contact details for the MD who failed to return my call.
I dispute that (company) can have incurred any costs over and above the agreed planning application costs of £300, especially bearing in mind that as soon as the claim became “non standard” we were left to deal with it ourselves.
I therefore request that you return the deposit, less the £300 planning costs (£1100 to be returned) within 14 days of the date of this letter.
If you still state that additional costs have been incurred, then please return (within the same 14 days) a complete itemised breakdown of these costs, together with documentary evidence that they have been paid.
Yours sincerely yadda yadda yadda